I would like to start off by saying thank you to my friend Alyssa for giving me this book for Christmas. I was so excited to dive into it when I unwrapped it. The book had only been out for a couple of weeks, so it was very exciting.

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Nerissa Marin hides among teens in her human form, waiting for the day she can claim her birthright—the undersea kingdom stolen from her the day her father was murdered. Blending in is her best weapon—until her father's betrayer confronts Nerissa and challenges her to a battle to the death on Nerissa's upcoming birthday—the day she comes of age.
Amid danger and the heartbreak of her missing mother, falling for a human boy is the last thing Nerissa should do. But Lo Seavon breaches her defenses and somehow becomes the only person she can count on to help her desperate search for her mother, a prisoner of Nerissa's mortal enemy. Is Lo the linchpin that might win Nerissa back her crown? Or will this mortal boy become the weakness that destroys her?" -Goodreads
THE STORY:
I have only ever really read one other Mermaid book, and was so excited to dive into this one. However, I will say that this is most definitely NOT a Mermaid book, even if it has been made to seem that way. A vast majority of the book is spent on land, with only snippets of information about the underwater world that these creatures called Aquarathi inhabit. In fact, due to the fact that they only spend one chapter in Waterfell at all, there is practically no world building. What I thought was going to be an epic tale of Merpeople War ended up being a story heavily centred around insta-love and the main character pining away over the guy for the rest of the book. The story had so much potential, but it just didn't live up to it.
THE CHARACTERS:
Lets start with Nerissa, our main character. I had such conflicting feelings about her for most of the book, until finally I just couldn't stand her any more. The part of her that I liked at first was that she was a bit of a nerd. She liked anime and made references to some of my favorite television shows and movies. However, the references started to get weird, inaccurate, and began to sound forced. What I didn't like about her came from the two polar opposite sides of her personality. One one side, she was so cocky. She always said how she was the most powerful being, the strongest and the smartest, and basically that she was just better than all of the humans because of the fact that her species is 'more evolved.' However, as soon as really important events begin to happen, she becomes weak, pathetic and whiny. Her every thought was quickly filled with nothing but Lo, the love interest, which were often repetitive and annoying things to read. Over all, I just ended up really disliking Nerissa.
Lotharius, or Lo as he is known as throughout most of the book, was just as annoying, however for more biased reasons on my part. He is a complete and total slacker who seems to expect that he will be able to live off of his mother's earnings for the rest of his life. He has no work ethic, doesn't show up to school the majority of the time, and when he knows that he is making someone else, who was always doing her best at school, start doing the same thing, he just lets her keep doing it, and tries to find reasons to get her to leave school with him. I understand that the last bit if fairly normal for teenage couples, but as a person who has always valued education in my life, it is ridiculously annoying to see someone throw it away because they are too lazy to do it, especially when they are obviously very intelligent, as Lo seems to be.
The only character who I even kind of liked was Jenna, Nerissa's best friend in the human world. She is smart, loyal, and willing to do anything to help the people she loves. However I still found that her reactions to some things were not quite realistic. She doesn't freak out when she sees Nerissa's true form, which I will repeat IS NOT A MERMAID. The most realistic thing she does is get a taser to keep herself safe from the other Aquarathi, who she realizes may not be as friendly as her friend and her family.
I would talk about Nerissa's family, Echlios, Soren, and Speio, but I don't really know what to say about them. Echlios and Soren did their jobs, and Speio is a very slimy, unreliable character. That is basically all there is to them.
The evil character Ehmora would probably have been better if we had gotten more of her in the book, but as we don't really learn anything about her until the last fifty pages or so, we don't even really get a true feeling of villainy from her. She just comes off as being a defiant person, or maybe a bit deviant as opposed to seeming truly evil.
MY THOUGHTS:
Over all, this book took me almost a month to read while reading other things in between because I just couldn't get into it, or read more than one or two chapters at a time. I was very disappointed with the story and how things went, along with how the characters made me feel while I followed them on their adventure. The next book in the series comes out on July 29th of this year, and there is a part of me that would like to read it, just to see what happens, but I don't think that I will be doing so, especially if it is going to let me down as much as this one did.
In a nut shell, I didn't enjoy the book, I really disliked the characters, and I don't really recommend this book to anyone.
STAR RATING: ★★